Freekin' Sweet
This is so cool man! I was wondering the whole time how this was going to sound, and I am impressed!
Originality-8: Even though you used the same melodies (pretty much what a remix is), you managed to make it sound totally unique and different from mine, adding your own styles and ideas.
Diversity-10: Unlike mine, this isn't repetitive at all. There is so much variation with the beat and melodies, while making it also have a progressive feel to it.
Clarity-10: All synths, effects, and rythms used blended almost perfectley.
Effort-8: I can tell you put lots of hard work into this. Even though you didn't change the melodies at all (which doesn't matter), all of the other elements of the song were done very well.
Criticism: Only a few things were a little strange to me. On the third beat of the main melody, you added a little slide tool to each of those notes. Even though I think it sounded cool, I think you should of used it sparingly since it got kind of annoying after a while. Also, even though the snare drum you used sounded great, I don't think it fit in perfectley with the style. I think if you used a different clap or more electronic sounding snare drum, it might of fit in more
Overall, this song is FREEKIN' SWEET! And I am very suprised in how it turned out. No wonder it took you so long!
-Thattixx